I am not sure how I would use writing What We Teach. I see it as dangerous if presented in the wrong manner or overtly cautious or overtly reckless. I do see the benefits in having a Textual Analysis on hand which corresponds to what we wish our students to produce, but I am not sure I want to show my process to my students. I inherently write in a process which cannot be really reproduced. It changes on the assignment and how well I know the materials. A simple analysis like this, I will write it knowing exactly what I feel about the text and what I want to say about it with final proofreading and logic checking at the end. But the rough draft and final draft are almost identical in nature. Whereas if I have a 20 page marathon paper over the definition and application of the romanticized ideological author in the Post-modern literary world, it may involve some heavy outlining, note taking, revising, and other nuances of a process.
Presenting the assignment is teaching them how to think towards the assignment. They can see some an example of the thinking needed to produce an agreeable text. Whereas presenting a process may in fact run the risk of teaching them a process not their own. If I had multiple examples of multiple processes at work, I would feel highly inclined to utilize it as different methods would be presented. The fear of a dogmatized instructor process would not plague me.
This is not to say I think all processes are good, but a process is something which occurs naturally and appears purely in the academic setting. I do feel teaching writing as a process is a superior method, but I am not comfortable with teaching a process of writing which is what I fear presenting my process to my students will do.
I can already think of multiple comments, negative responses specifically, which could be presented towards this thinking. I will respond as needed..or wanted.
Wednesday, April 23, 2008
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i'm not going to be negative! :) i think you make a compelling case. you're right -- there is something to say about narrowing the definition of "process" by giving an example -- and the students are going to look to you as that example. ("i want to be, i want to be like kevin...") but i think it is important for the students to know that we HAVE a process (more so than to know what that process is specifically) -- and to realize we just don't magically conjur a perfect paper. (yes, we know now how to craft a textual analysis in a couple hours, but to these students, the textual analysis might as well be one of those mammoth 20 pagers). i'm going to present my process as evidence that there IS a process for me as much as for them.
Kevin, I agree with Jen. Your post is both well-considered and pertinent, and students need to learn that writing is a process. When we read published authors, we're examining the polished result of a very messy process. If we give students only these examples, they probably think there's something wrong with them if their writing isn't equally polished in the first draft. This could be a writing block and/or confidence killer for some students. By showing students your process, you can reassure them that good writing doesn't just happen on the first try.
If you're worried about engendering conformist processes, as a good teacher should, then you could bring in multiple processes and emphasize the fact that some work better for others. I'd be happy to let you have my Writing What We Teach draft. Some literature anthologies have "poems in progress" and stuff like that. Just food for thought.
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Kevin, your response to my blog was very thoughtful and astute. I appreciate it. And do I really start all my comments on your blog with (more or less), "I agree, but ..."? I'm sorry! I'll have to watch that from now on! :)
You took the words right out of my mouth (fingers?). While I agree with Jen that our students should know we have a process, I don't know that that benefit outweighs the risk of setting a frustrating example for our students to try and follow (see my Writing What We Teach post).
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